Critiques

Interim Critique

On the 3rd October we had an interim critique where we were asked to get into pairs and write three things that are good about our partners work and three areas of improvement.

Good
- Good mini task work - included research, all images taken, edits & finals
- Location lighting explanation
- Good explanations in proposal/introduction/ideas

Areas for Improvement
- Finish research, write about how they inspire you
- NEED TO TAKE PHOTOS ASAP
- Write about studio equipment and what effects you can achieve using these.

After this critique we were asked to set ourselves three SMART targets to have completed by the end of the day, I set myself these three;

- Complete 2 more research
- Write up studie equipment descriptions
- Plan out photoshoots

Final Critique

On the 16th October we had a final critique of our final images, we placed our images on to the desks and put post its with them, then we had to go around and write positive and area's of improvements for three other peoples work.

I had not finished two of my final images so I printed out what I had done.

Good
- Good layout of objects in the image
- Like the heart made out of the wires
- Good images
- Concept is really good and have some really good ideas

Areas for Improvement
- Need quite a bit more work to them
- Image is a bit dark
- A little too basic